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Anyway, I'll try to sum up her backstory. Ik her backstory is bad and uninteresting, but why do you think I want her critiqued?

Once there was a wolf named Lilyeth. She practiced dark magic and was considered a witch. She lives in a village of wolves. Anyway, the reason why the residence of the village didn't execute her was because she stayed in hiding under the village. The reason why she didn't just go away from the village was because staying near it had its benefits. She could steal food, quietly listen in on lessons being taught in schools, (That was how she learned to read) and other things. However, because no one wanted to be her friend, she got lonely. So, she got to work creating her own companion out of dark magic. She named her companion "Jude." She kept Jude in her hideout and taught her everything she knew. Jude was quite intelligent. However, Jude got tired of Lilyeth's dirty hideout. So, one day when Lilyeth was not in the hideout, Jude exited it. his was quite hard for her, as Lilyeth had put a shield meant to block Jude from going out. (This was because Lilyeth didn't want Jude to get out, in fear the other wolves might see her perform dark magic and execute her because they thought she was a witch) However, she successfully got out. She was amazed. She never knew the sun was so bright, or how many other wolves there were. After exploring until night, she realized that Lilyeth must be traveling back to the hideout, so Jude tried to do a Teleportation Spell. However, it backfired, and she was teleported into the center of the village, the busiest part of it. And everyone saw her. They guards were quick to a put magic disabling necklace around her neck, and the necklace also was impossible for anyone except the person who put it on her to get off. She was executed the next morning. Burned at the stake. Lilyeth was devastated. She, after careful consideration, made another friend. She named them Jade. Jade, who had no idea that their was another wolf who had been Lilyeth's friend, was also taught everything that Lilyeth knew. Lilyeth was extra careful with Jade, and, to prevent Jade from being curious and going outside, she let Jade out with her supervision. However, the residence of the village did something terrible. This terrible thing, and he fact that they killed her first friend, was what drove Lilyeth to do what she did next. As for what it was, I have yet to come up with that, but it was enough for her to start killing them all because of it. She went on a killing spree, and when Jade saw this, she knew what to do in order to stop Lilyeth. She had to kill her. They fought, and eventually Jade delivered the death blow. 

Anyway, that's it.

Yes, very much so!

Sorry for the super late reply. :/